I really like the color gradients you got from the gels, and the placement of the prism on the left of the frame. I also like that the writing on the Coke bottle is in another language, so it becomes more about form than language. One thing that you may want to fix in post is the black bottom left corner. I find it very distracting.
The composition is really nice in this image but I wonder if it would be more interesting to solely work with compositions in the reflection, or add more dimensions as far as the physical composition goes (with the reflections more intermingled with the physical objects). I think it's really neat that you're working with reflections though, considering your final last semester in darkroom.
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I really like the color gradients you got from the gels, and the placement of the prism on the left of the frame. I also like that the writing on the Coke bottle is in another language, so it becomes more about form than language. One thing that you may want to fix in post is the black bottom left corner. I find it very distracting.
The composition is really nice in this image but I wonder if it would be more interesting to solely work with compositions in the reflection, or add more dimensions as far as the physical composition goes (with the reflections more intermingled with the physical objects). I think it's really neat that you're working with reflections though, considering your final last semester in darkroom.
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